Jennifer writing

WALT: write a descriptive piece of writing.

Success criteria:

1. My story says where, when, who, why and how.
2. The events are in order.
3. I will use time words (first, then, finally, etc.).
4. Details are added to make my writing interesting. Adding adjectives (no went!)

Well done Jennifer on a very detailed piece of writing. All your event are also in order.

Next step: use different time words to split your sentence up and to make your writing more interesting.

Jennifer Recount